Oh, this is good stuff by Susan! One of the things she wanted me to mention is, like with all editors, authors have feedback on all suggestions – because that …
Chapter 2.1 MacKenzie SMW comments on RH edits
As usual, RH did a superb job of going through this – not only catching some deep POV fixes, but also some structural issues to do with her filmmaking, etc. …
Chapter 2.1 Rough Draft – MacKenzie POV – RH Edits
Chapter 2.1 Rough Draft A “It just feels like running to me, Greg, and the truth is…I never run.” MacKenzie walked to the railing of his rooftop porch, overlooking Manhattan …
Chapter 2.1 Rough Draft – Mackenzie’s POV
Here it is – chapter 2.1 – MacKenzie’s POV! Thank you to the VOICES for all their direction and input over the weekend! Now it’s time for comments, questions and …
Final rough draft of Chapter 1.2 + Thoughts to prep Chapter 2!
Here it is – the final rough draft of chapter 1.2. (I am sure you are tired of reading it by now!) Note, I’ve made a few more changes (especially …