by Melissa Tagg, @Melissa_Tagg

I wrote my first novella in 2014…and, true story, I had noooo clue what I was doing! I’d published three novels at the time. I’d written short stories in college. But nothing in-between.

Since then, though, I’ve written four more novellas and they’ve become some of my very favorite writing projects.

I’ve also been intentional about reading more novellas, too. Prior to writing my own, I hadn’t read more than a handful. But lately, especially during busy seasons, I’ve enjoyed sinking into shorter books.

But here’s the thing with novellas: Some of them feel like full, complete stories and some of them, well, don’t. Through both writing and reading novellas, I’ve picked up a few tips for crafting novellas that feel as satisfying as full-length novels:

• Character counts…like, a lot!

To me, what makes or breaks a novella—or any story, really—is character depth. I’ve read a few novellas where plenty happens in the story, but I still walk away thinking, huh, that didn’t do much for me. And every time, it’s because the characters felt wooden, distant. They might’ve had a clear surface goal in the story, but I didn’t know anything about their dreams or fears. I didn’t get a feel for a dark moment in their past that shaped who they are today. Thus, the stuff that happened in the story felt a little less weighty and significant.

Just like we do when we’re writing 90,000-word novels, characters in novellas need to be fully fleshed out. When I feel like my own novella is lacking the emotional heft I want, it’s almost always because I’m packing the story with plot while sacrificing character. That’s when I go back and shave off a plot point in favor of expanding my character depth. (And how do I do that? I refocus on the SEQ.)

• We still need a sense of place.

I read a novella recently and while much of it was fun and cute, I realized at the end that it could’ve taken place anywhere. Nothing about the storyworld resonated.

“But, Melissa!” you say. “There’s not space in a novella to wax eloquent on storyworld.” So true.

But here’s the thing: We don’t need always need a panoramic view of your town or your character’s every surrounding.

What we need are specific details that carry emotional weight. Is your character in a kitchen? We don’t necessarily need the entire blueprint of the room. Maybe all we need to see is a coffee mug with a quirky quote on it…or a calendar with a date crossed out by a menacing red X…or a table hand-crafted by the hero…all things that pull double-duty by both grounding us in the scene and giving us insight into your character.

Another thing to keep in mind when it comes to setting is making sure to place us in a new space in most scenes. By doing that, you give the reader a sense of movement that will, in place of the multiple plot points and/or sub-plots of a longer story, make this shorter story feel richer and fuller. Even if your entire novella is set in one house, you can move us from room to room, inside to outside, or even get extra fun and take us up to a rooftop or down to a basement.

• What do you want to make your reader feel?

This is a question I’m constantly returning to when writing novellas. It can be so tempting to throw in a sub-plot just for the sake of expanding the story…or attempt to pack in extra side characters…or force a moral or theme that isn’t natural. That’s when I have to stop writing and step back and think, “Wait, Melissa. What is it I actually want my readers to feel as they’re reading this?”

In my case, as a writer of romantic novellas, it’s not about mystifying the reader with a twisty plot or convicting them with a lesson. It’s about making them feel warm and swoony. It’s about making them laugh one minute and sigh in romantic happiness the next. And maybe, if I’ve done my job well, it’s about lighting just a little spiritual spark and trusting God and the reader to take it from there.

When I remember why I’m writing the book, it helps me refocus and hone in on only the characters and plot points that matter and contribute to that overall feeling I want to give the reader. It removes the temptation to overly widen the story and instead, it helps me deepen it.

Bonus tip for the romance writers: You don’t always need to get your characters down a church aisle…especially if they don’t even know each other at the beginning of the story. In that case, sometimes it’s hard to believe that 30,000 words later they’re saying their “I do’s.” ☺ Not that it can’t be done well. But in general, consider taking a little pressure off the pace of your story and instead make your end goal a simple “I love you” or even “I like you a whole lot and should we consider dating or something?” 

All This Time (Walker Family Book 4) 

Bear McKinley’s past refuses to let go.

Ten years ago, Bear gave up everything—his freedom and his reputation—for his mess of a family. But after years of distance and too many attempts at starting over, he finally has a new life doing noble work in Brazil . . . until his past catches up to him once again. Suddenly he finds himself back in Maple Valley, charged with the care of his missing brother’s children, convinced he’s out of second chances to make his life count. And yet, with every day that passes, these kids, this quirky town and the woman he never stopped missing help patch the holes in his heart. Maybe this is the fresh start he’s been longing for all along. But as his newfound hope grows, so does the mystery surrounding his brother’s activities—and when the threat reaches into the lives of those he loves, it’s clear he can’t run away this time.

Fear holds Raegan’s future captive.

Raegan Walker is fine. She’s happy working a slew of part-time jobs, still living in her childhood bedroom and rarely venturing from her hometown. At least, that’s what she tells everyone . . . and herself. But she can’t help wondering what might’ve happened if she hadn’t abandoned her art so many years ago—and if Bear McKinley had never left. When Bear returns and she’s commissioned for a painting that just might revive her artistic ambition all in one week, it’s time to finally reach for more than fine. But doing so means facing the fears that have held her back all this time, including admitting the secret she’s kept from Bear and her family. With her dream and her heart on the line, how much will Raegan have to risk to finally chase her happy ending?

Melissa Tagg is the award-winning author of the popular Walker Family series, the Where Love Begins series and the Enchanted Christmas Collection. She’s a former reporter, current nonprofit grant writer and total Iowa girl. Her recent releases include a Carol Award Winner(One Enchanted Noel), an RT Book Reviews TOP PICK (All This Time) and a Publishers Weekly Spring Top Ten Pick (Like Never Before). Melissa has taught at multiple national writing conferences, as well as workshops and women’s retreats. When she’s not writing, she can be found hanging out with the coolest family ever, watching old movies, and daydreaming about her next book. Melissa loves connecting with readers at www.melissatagg.com and on Facebook and Instagram.