So, although I think I still need to add more storyworld – 5 senses and mood to this scene, I’m going to put it in the bank, and keep going, …
Chapter 2.2, Luke’s POV, RH suggestions with SMW comments!
RH comments highlighted in grey SMW comments highlighted in yellow Changes highlighted in blue Ch 2.2 – Luke’s pov Fate knew how to make a man suffer. It wasn’t …
Rough Draft Chapter 1.2 by SMW
So, here we have it, the rough draft of Luke Alexander’s scene. Poor Luke has a dark, riddled past, which we’ll uncover as we go along. But he’s also a …
Final Scene, Chapter One, Scene One
Susie & Rachel’s thoughts: A couple things we wanted to point out – first, note the changed hook. Neither Rachel nor I like starting a book with dialogue or a …
Chapter 1: Scene One, Susie’s Response
My turn! These are all great thoughts that Rachel has inserted, and going through them has made me think through all my motivations, and how I draw out the …