Here it is – the final rough draft of chapter 1.2. (I am sure you are tired of reading it by now!) Note, I’ve made a few more changes (especially …
Oh, do I have a treat for you! Line Edits on Chapter 1.2!
My good pal, Editor Extraordinaire Susan K. Downs has stepped in to add her editor’s voice to Blog-a-Book! While Rachel, Sarah and I are Story Crafters (a Susie-ism that I’m …
Chapter 1.2 with SMW comments to RH edits. =)
Great edits once again by Rachel! Note, especially, the thoughts on the HOOK, emotional layering, and dialogue. It’s hard for me to get the flow of it when it is …
Edit rough draft Chapter 1.2 by RH
So, here we have it, the rough draft of Luke Alexander’s scene. Poor Luke has a dark, riddled past, which we’ll get to. But he’s also a hero, so although …
Rough Draft Chapter 1.2 by SMW
So, here we have it, the rough draft of Luke Alexander’s scene. Poor Luke has a dark, riddled past, which we’ll uncover as we go along. But he’s also a …