How to Write a Suspense: Chapter 2 Checklist

Yesterday, we talked about the considerations that go into crafting Chapter 2 of your novel.  To see an application of these considerations, read Kenzie’s scene: Chapter 2.Scene 2.Kenzie with SMW Comments

Here’s a checklist for you as you craft your chapter:

My Book Therapy Chapter ChecklistChapter 2 is The Great Debate.

  • Have I anchored my reader into the scene with enough storyworld/facts?
  • Have I recapped what happened so far, to remind the reader of the danger?
  • What are the choices before your character?
  • What will each choice cost them?
  • What is at stake for the POV character?  (IOW: what will happen if they don’t act?)
  • Why should they act?
  • Why shouldn’t they?
  • What is the best choice, and what is their motivation behind choosing that? (IOW:  hint at their backstory just enough to establish motivation, but not so much that you give the story away. )
  • Have you raised more questions with the backstory?
  • Have you hinted at the story question/theme of the book?
  • Have you layered in emotion through the use of verbs and nouns and figurative elements?
  • Has your character made a clear decision by the end of the scene?

If you’ve accomplished all this, then you’re POV character is ready for Chapter 3!

Next week we’ll dissect Luke’s Chapter 2 Scene, and the Meeting of the Hero/Heroine.

If you’re going to the ACFW Conference, stop by the MBT Booth and say hi!  (and I hope to see you at the Pizza Party!)

Susie May

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