So here’s the deal. I was teaching all day Saturday at the MN Christian Writer’s Guild spring seminar, and then again on Monday night, at their monthly meeting, then I drove home on Tuesday, 6 hours, only to arrive just in time to pick up my oldest son and another son’s bike, return to town, drop off my packages, then hang around until another son got done with track practice, only to pick them (sons and bikes) all back up and return home, drag in my suitcases and drop into a heap.
That’s the backstory to why I didn’t blog yesterday. Now, I’m thinking you didn’t need all that. A simple….life washed over me and swept me away, and I was unable to blog would have been sufficient. Yes, it might have been slightly interesting that I did all that running, and with whom, and why, but…well, not enough to make you all read through it to get to the point which is…
Backstory is for the author, not the reader. It’s important for YOU, the author, to develop the story, but really, the reader just wants to know the OUTCOME of the backstory, and how it affected your character.
This week we’re going to be talking about BACKSTORY in MBT, how to develop it, how and when to weave it in, what to weave in, etc. First, however, let’s address the biggest issue with backstory: How much should you develop?
Answer: Enough to know your characters motivations for why he/she does the things they do in your story.
If your character loved to draw as a child, and always dreamed of being an artist, that’s only important if it has something to do with the plot. If he’s a detective solving a murder, it might not have anything to do with the story. However, if he is asked to draw the suspect, and discovers the rusty talent he had, then perhaps it is slightly important. If, even better, he loved to draw, and had talent, but his father told him he was a terrible artist (in order to discourage such a “frivolous” career), and the story is about a policeman who discovers that he has the ability to see the crimes in the pictures he draws, (and thus was always meant to use this God-given gift) well, suddenly this backstory takes on relevance.
As the author, you always want to figure out what elements of their past molded them into the people they are today. Mostly because you’re going to use the fears and dreams, the secrets and mistakes from their past to construct their story.
Ask your character: What is your darkest secret, and how has that affected you today? What nightmare have you carried with you, and what do you fear because of it? What was your happiest moment as a child? Why? These answers create the backstory that counts.
I’ve read countless books where the character seems to have been born on page one. They’re flat, uninteresting, even unbelievable. Even worse, however, is when the character’s entire life history is fleshed out in the first three chapters. I’m not going to remember (as a reader) what college he/she went to. But tell me that he witnessed a murder as a ten year old, and yes, that I’ll remember.
We talked a lot in the beginning months of our journey about sitting your character down and chatting with him about why he is who he is. This is the backstory, and is essential for a well-rounded, three-dimensional, living breathing character, and the key to creating a hero/heroine that your reader will root for. (Mostly because hopefully, he’ll have elements about his past that most people can relate to).
Rachel and I were talking about how to develop a new series, how working on the backstory, really fleshing it out is essential. Not only will it give characters depth but here’s the REAL gem – it will generate future story ideas, also. If our characters had a childhood friend who died, or went missing, although it might not be the biggest event in her life, it’s an element authors can use to develop a future storyline. Backstory gives you material to work with.
And material gives you options for your story. Take the time to flesh out the backstory. It’s a little like digging for treasure….you’ll never know what priceless artifacts you might fine.
Okay, so now that you have your backstory, how much do you tell? What tidbits do you drop, and how thick?
Stop by tomorrow and we’ll talk about Dropping the Breadcrumbs that entice your reader to follow…
Off to unpack!
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I’ve been reading Book Therapy for a few months now and always glean something good from your posts. I especially loved this one, because I’m working on a book proposal for a memoir. Researching family history stuff is different from fiction, but backstory is backstory, and your words are helpful. Thanks!