by David Rawlings, @DavidJRawlings
I sacrificed 1000 worthy helpers yesterday. Troops that had served me well. Cut. Gone. They played their role.
I want to pay tribute to those 1000 words I deleted yesterday. They held the line until a better option turned up. They propped up the first draft when the right words were reluctant to come forward.
We can get so hung up on word counts and targets in our constant drive to write. We have to move forward, with 250 words a day for the next six months otherwise we won’t get there. And we’ve got James L Rubart’s word count tracker ticking along nicely, driving our WIP forward. Thanks Jim.
Sometimes I’ve been disheartened when I’ve stood back from my computer after two hours and my word count has gone backwards. There is a short stab of disappointment – I’ve spent two hours writing and I’ve got nothing to show for it. Thankfully that stab is short. The work is better for fewer words.
Taking words out improves the work, and it’s necessary. Editing is a part of the process for any writer. As I’ve been talking to other writers, I’ve realized that editing can sometimes be a challenge for most of us. Sometimes it’s because we’re too close. But on occasion it’s because we may not realize the different ways we need to edit. And as I’ve now edited two novels, I have found I use different approaches at different times for different reasons. And I use different tools as well.
The first cut is using a large cleaver. The job of the cleaver is to hack away large chunks – to remove whole sections that aren’t needed. When editing, we use the cleaver when a whole storyline isn’t working. Large swathes go in the big picture sense. We make structural changes because of a saggy middle. Or a character changes completely because our original view of them has changed now the story is developing.
The second cut is using a carving knife. The job of the carving knife is to slice, to make more refined cuts. This is when you carve off sentences that don’t fit because you’ve simply restated a point in a slightly different way. Your second sentence does nothing but say what you said the first time around. See?
The third cut is using a paring knife. A paring knife is used in your hand like an artist’s brush. It shapes tomatoes into roses and fruit into sculpture. As editors, we need the paring knife when we are fine-tuning scenes; to shape our drafts into something more beautiful by being something less. I had my metaphorical paring knife in my hand yesterday.
Sometimes the approach to editing needs to consider the different needs of the edit. How do you approach the process of editing your hard-earned words?
David Rawlings is a based in South Australia, a sports-mad father-of-three who loves humor and a clever turn-of-phrase. Over a 25-year career, he has put words on the page to put food on the table, developing from sports journalism and copywriting to corporate communication. Now in fiction, he entices readers to look deeper into life with stories that combine the every day with a sense of the speculative, addressing the fundamental questions we all face.
His debut novel – The Baggage Handler – hit the shelves in March 2019 and is available where all good books are sold! Books: http://books2read.com/Baggage ~ Website: www.davidrawlings.com.au ~ Facebook: David Rawlings – Author ~ Instagram: davidrawlingsauthor ~ Twitter: @DavidJRawlings