Great edits once again by Rachel! Note, especially, the thoughts on the HOOK, emotional layering, and dialogue. It’s hard for me to get the flow of it when it is …
Rough Draft Chapter 1.2 by SMW
So, here we have it, the rough draft of Luke Alexander’s scene. Poor Luke has a dark, riddled past, which we’ll uncover as we go along. But he’s also a …
Final Scene, Chapter One, Scene One
Susie & Rachel’s thoughts: A couple things we wanted to point out – first, note the changed hook. Neither Rachel nor I like starting a book with dialogue or a …
Chapter 1: Scene One, Susie’s Response
My turn! These are all great thoughts that Rachel has inserted, and going through them has made me think through all my motivations, and how I draw out the …
Chapter 1: Scene 1!
Here we go…chapter ONE, scene ONE of…??? (okay, we need to name our book!) Scroll to the bottom after you read the scene and I’ll discuss for a moment the …
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