3 Tips to Help You Describe Your Character’s Eye or Hair Color

Being writers makes us describers.

We introduce a main character, knowing we are required to describe how our hero or heroine or villain looks, sounds, yes, even how they smell.

Sometimes we go so far as to “cast” our books, assembling photos of actors and actresses on Pinterest boards – our dream ensemble, should our novel ever become a movie.

Recently, I found myself talking writing with a variety of published authors. The question: How to describe a character’s hair color.

Easy to do, right?

Nope.

How many times have you heard brown hair – or blond or black or red – described in “heard it all before” terms?
Brown hair – brown sugar
• Blond hair – honey blond
• Black hair – jet black
• Red hair – copper

And what about eye color?
Cornflower blue eyes
• Chocolate brown eyes
• Emerald green eyes

The challenge is to come up with fresh words to illustrate things other authors are also describing. To take everyday things and make them ours. No, not ours – make them our characters. But how do we do that?

Tie the color back to your character’s favorite memory – something related to their Happiest Moment. If your heroine’s favorite memory takes place during the spring, maybe the hero’s eyes are the green of new spring grass. If the memory centers around a family campout, maybe the hero’s eyes are the smoky grey that lingers around a campfire.
Keep colors in context and connect colors back to your character’s profession or hobbies. If your character is an outdoorsy person, then maybe the heroine’s eyes are as blue as the Colorado sky – a very distinct blue, by the way. If your character is dog groomer, maybe the hero’s hair is the same burnished red color as an Irish setter’s.
Google a specific color – blue, green, brown – and then click on the link for images. By browsing through photographs, you come across fresh images to spark new ways to describe colors. When I googled the color “brown,” a photo prompted me to describe my hero’s eyes as a “faded brown leather.” DISCLAIMER: Sometimes you run across some “dicey” images when you google a color. Just be forewarned.

What helps you be creative when describing a character’s eye or hair color?

Comments 2

  1. This might be an illustrative example:

    Beth shrugged, hardly listening to the trainer. All she could hear was a steady flood of words, none of them the slightest bit interesting.

    And then she heard a cough.

    Looking up, she found her face a scant three or four inches away from Mister Bloom’s, his cinnamon eyes boring directly into hers.

    Cinnamon?

    Her stomach rumbled. Surely it was time for lunch.

    This is a great post, by the way. It’s something we can all do to remind ourselves about from time to time..

    Thank you, Beth

  2. An illustration

    “As she turned to throw herself into the welcoming waters of the bed ,she smelled a mild but captivating scent all of a sudden in the room. She instantly became stiff like a robot and slowly turned to see the demon who was able to capture his mind with his scent.
    Her green eyes landed on a tall but hunky man and his curly hair that rumbled like a stormy- dark sea sent her out of her senses and instantly,she collapsed unto the ground ”
    That was a paragraph from one ” when I met that mysterious girl ” by
    Agyeiwaa Tianahills

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