Keep on writing, keep on writing

I wrote a novella last week.  31, 160 words.  That’s over 5K a day.  Now, here’s what we all have to keep in mind – many of these words will have to be rewritten or deleted.  I will have to go scene by scene and make sure I’ve inserted storyworld, and the 5 Ws to anchor the scene.  I’ll have to ask what the main emotion of the scene is, and how to strengthen it. I’ll have to tighten my writing, make it clearer, make sure I’m not overwriting.

I’ll have to make sure I am telling the story between the quotes, and that I am wrapping up my dialogue with the right meaningful action and body language, adding zingers.

And, I’ll have to make sure I all the ingredients of the Scene Tension Equation.  

All these things are in my brain as I’m writing, trust me.  But, if I want to forget ahead and give myself something to work with, then I have to be like Dori in Finding Nemo.

Don’t look back.  Forget everything but my goal….reaching the end. (or, P Sherman, 42 Wallaby Way)

(and, if you want a fun break, here’s that little scene:)


But how do we keep that focus?  I know it can be hard, because even in the middle of a scene you suddenly think: WAIT!  I just came up with something BRILLIANT and I need to add it into chapter 3!

No. No you don’t.  NOT YET.

OR, you might get to the middle of your story and think…wait! Is this really going to work? You’ll be tempted at this moment to stop your fast drafting, go back, read through your story, and start over, fixing it. After all, you know your character so much better by now, right?


Speak these words into your brain:  Don’t worry (Susie, but feel free to insert your name here). You’ll fix it AFTER your fast draft is finished.

In the meantime, here’s what you’re going to do:

You’re going to write down what you need to do either in the comments of your WIP, or in a notebook – or wherever you choose to store your brilliant ideas. (Wouldn’t it be great if we could use a Pensieve, like Dumbledore?  But short of that…a notebook would work…)

You might also write a note to yourself in the MS, like, “Insert Storyworld Here.”  or “Deep Emotion here.”

Basically, you’re giving yourself permission to just keep writing.

Here’s another fun trick I do to motivate myself. I write each scene in a separate word doc. Then, I combine all the scenes into the chapter at the end of my daily writing session (which gives me my daily word count).  THIS, I post on Facebook, to my friends, shout it down to my family and wait for the cheering. 🙂  Then, I take that chapter and paste it into my master doc.  It calculates my total word count for my WIP.

And that reminds me that if I just keep swimming, I will eventually reach P Shermon, 42 Wallaby Way.

Go! Write something Brilliant!




Pitching Tip #3! Understand your STAKES!

Hey friends! I hope you had a great weekend.  This week, we’re coming at you with Pitching Tip #3 – I hope you find it helpful!



If you’re attending the ACFW Conference (or any other writing conference) and want some help in learning how to pitch a novel, then check out the Pitch and Promotion Seminar!  With coaches that help you hone and practice you pitch, as well as teach you how to promote yourself at conference, and afterwards, this seminar will teach you how to wake an editor or agent up to your brilliant story!

Check it out here:

Have a great week and go write something brilliant!

Susie May