Chapter 2.1 Rough Draft A “It just feels like running to me, Greg, and the truth is…I never run.” MacKenzie walked to the railing of his rooftop porch, overlooking Manhattan …
Chapter 2.1 Rough Draft – Mackenzie’s POV
Here it is – chapter 2.1 – MacKenzie’s POV! Thank you to the VOICES for all their direction and input over the weekend! Now it’s time for comments, questions and …
Final rough draft of Chapter 1.2 + Thoughts to prep Chapter 2!
Here it is – the final rough draft of chapter 1.2. (I am sure you are tired of reading it by now!) Note, I’ve made a few more changes (especially …
Oh, do I have a treat for you! Line Edits on Chapter 1.2!
My good pal, Editor Extraordinaire Susan K. Downs has stepped in to add her editor’s voice to Blog-a-Book! While Rachel, Sarah and I are Story Crafters (a Susie-ism that I’m …
Chapter 1.2 with SMW comments to RH edits. =)
Great edits once again by Rachel! Note, especially, the thoughts on the HOOK, emotional layering, and dialogue. It’s hard for me to get the flow of it when it is …